Science more than a word
Science is
useful:
Science is an a good form to know the unknown, also is
a list of process, by experiment, investigation and a lot of hard work, that
allows us to link isolated facts into coherent and a easy way to comprehensive
understandings of the natural world, furthermore, science has taught us to
live day by day, thanks to new technologies that have been created.
But what I mean with science is useful? This answer is very easy, in our times
science is continually refining and expanding.Something impresionant is that can be used to develop new
technologies, like computers, tv, cars, planes and a lot of things more.For me
is very important because this help our life's and often makes more easier and
more comfortable. The only disadvantage for me of the creations of technologies
based in the knowledge of science is the bad use, like creations of arms,
polluting industry and a many other influence.
To conclude, I want to remember the importance of science to us, because every day
we learn new things,experience and without science our life's would not be the
same.In the other hand science can be useful always if is used in the right
way and not fot the opposite.
Franco:
ResponderEliminarUse punctuation in P.1
Use a/an appropriately
Insert article "the" when needed.
First line, P2 is incorrect : question form
Vocabulary: actuality : WRONG
Second paragraph needs better organization. Difficult to understand.
Conclusion has many grammar mistakes.
REWRITE AND FINISH TOOMORROW PLEASE!
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